critique3

The picture is of Jeff Hardy and Edge. They are both wrestlers and they put there body on the line for all the people or fans that like to watch it. In this picture Jeff is the guy holding the title in his right hand and gloating to Edge his opponent during their match. This picture works great for my concept because they are both fighting to win their match. In the end my favorite of the two ends up winning which made me happy. They always do all they can do pretty much, weather they win or not they always give it their all in every match. In this picture the lighting was blue in the background and could have been better camera angles. Although I like it, it has some things that could have been done better. Jeff usually has face paint on and it either sweated off or he didn’t put enough on for this match. They both have tatoos they could have got a better look at their arms cause that’s where they mostly are. They both have tatoos they could have got a better look at their arms cause that’s where they mostly are. They are their own one man army. They also could have blown the picture up a little bit too it wouldn’t have hurt so that we could read what was written on the title as well.

http://www.museumoflondon.org.uk/English/Collections/OnlineResources/X20L/Themes/1383/1089/

http://www.angelfire.com/nm/boxingmuseum/

3rd museum

http://www.bhoc.com/museum.htm

http://www.boltonmuseums.org.uk/collections/local-history/work-and-industry/fire-fighting/

http://ilmuseums.com/museum_eng.asp?id=210

Narrative Writing #1

It was one mourning like any other in the household of the Griffins on Spooner street. It started
with the dad (Peter) going to work. Louis cooking breakfast for the family and also making the
kids their lunches to take to school.. Then they all begin to argue over something stupid like
always just like they do in every episode. Then Louis begins to yell at everyone else and they
eventually blame Meg. She is the daughter in the family that is treated like the outcast of the
neighborhood. After they blame the lame Meg, the kids then leave for the school bus. On their
way to school they also come subject to name calling from the sporty football players. While
they were being abused verbally back at home Brian (the dog) and Stewie were getting back into
it. They were arguing over how Brian bet money on a boxing match with Stewie and lost and
owes Stewie money. Stewie says Brian you have 24 hours to get me my money. Then 24 hours
later Stewie confronts Brian and asks for the money, then Stewie threatens Brian. So Brian
pushes Stew back away from him and Stewie grabs his collar and begins to punch him. Brian
knows if he hurts Stewie to much he will get in trouble from the parents. He decides to take
everything Stewie gives him. Stewie then puts Brians head in the toilet and gives him a swirly.
Next he pushes him down the stairs, breaking his legs. Then continues to hit him with a sharp
pointy metal object. Brian begins to bleed from above the eyes.Then randomly Stewie pulls out a
gun and shoots Brian in both of his knees, Brian begs for mercy. Stewie then considers it and
then decides to grab a nearby flamethrower, and he burns Brian to a crisp. Brian is now so hurt
he can not move and says he will give Stewie his money. They go to the bank and Brian finnally
gives Stewi all the money he needed from the bet. Their battle has come to an end.